Goodbye my old friends was an EXTREMELY important chapter in this story as you remember that is when JASPER FINALLY LEAVES THE GANG! It is also when Alice and Jasper were about to head off to the dreaded New York City where Alice's parents and Spencer live! This chapter was actually not what I had planned at all! Jasper was not going to leave the gang for a while actually... LOL! But when I started writing it just typed itself out or something, my fingers have a mind of their own I guess..! But Jasper finally got tired of being a bad guy and he wanted to be good enough for Alice and good enough to be admired by Johnny. But something else big happened, Nick stood up for him. Nick has not been a big charactor in this story at all, just the old friend of Jasper. The one who got them into the gang, phft, nothing big! Nick sometimes seemed alright then other time like a big butthead, LOL! Like at the beginning (first chapter) he was the one who was going to start a fight with Edward about him making a move on Bella. But in this chapter he showed the side of the best friend he always was, sticking up for Jasper saying he would NOT hurt him and he would let him leave, even though the decission soulc have killed him.
Things you might not have noticed!
During this chapter and some before, but this one specifically I wanted to introduce Jasper actually FEELINGS peoples emotions! I know a lot of the Alice and Jasper know each other's emotions but that is mainly just because they know each other so well and the other person is like their other half so they can tell how they fell, BUT during this chapter as Jasper was doing his normal thing for the gang, the dirty work, Jasper began to feel the guy's fear and pain and it started to overcome Jasper which caused him to stumbled backward! there was also the part when Jasper went to see Alice after he left the gang "The happiness radiating off of her relaxed me more than ever," He is getting his powers! Although they will not be a big thing in this story, just the basics of them, he feels the emotions but cant manipulate them.
Hightlights of the Chapter!
1. “I’ll give you a hint!” I told her then shrugged my gang jacket off, dropping it on the floor. She narrowed her eyes and still had a confused look.
“You are hot?” She guessed with a lot of doubt.
“Yeah I get that a lot.” I chuckled, ruffling her hair up, and she glared at me for it.
“Emmett!” I called loudly down the stairs, I heard Alice laugh from the living room. Emmett stomped his way up the stairs and raised a questioning eyebrow.
“Can you bring Alice’s bags to the car?” I asked trying to be casual. He shrugged and went into the room to get the other first. I followed behind him with a smirk.
“Holy crap!” He yelled as he picked it up. “HOW MUCH DID SHE PUT IN HERE? It weighs a ton!” He grunted as he continued carrying it down the stairs. I grabbed mine which was much lighter and followed him. As Emmett passed Alice she chuckled.
“Amateurs…” She mumbled, still holding her angelic face.
3. Greg walked straight up to me, his face in mine. “This is your family Jasper. We are all you have; you are just going to drop us and everything we’ve been through?” He asked in a calm, innocent tone, but I knew anything I said I would get the same punishment. I just nodded my head in reply. He shrugged casually. “Your decision.” He stated and stepped back. He turned to Nick because this was his job now, well along with the others. Nick had to start the beatings. The other guys in the gang started grabbing their chains, and taking out their knives; waiting for their cue. I froze in shock as Nick shook his head.
“No. I won’t hurt him. He wants to leave, I’ll let him. He didn’t do anything to me.” He said, his eyes filling with some fear of his own, he held his ground. Greg too shocked he didn’t speak, his eyes wide with surprise. He glanced back from me to Nick. We were his lead guys, his right and left hand.
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