Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Chapters 18+19

Chapters 18+19- Meeting the parents part 1+2

What went on:
Now these two chapters had A LOT happening, them in a nut shell, OR A COCONUT SHELL; there's so much. Alice and Jasper go to meet Alice's parents *DUN DUN DUHH!* Right off Alice's dad, Dan, loves Jasper and accepts him, but Charlotte (Alice's mom) is a total other story! In chapter 18 they had a little time with her parents then headed to bed, ALICE FALLING ASLEEP IN JASPER'S BED, that means trouble! for sure! When they head down for breakfast with parents the next morning Alice's mom accuses them of sleeping together! LOL! Later that day it was time to head out, Alice with her mom; to the business, Jasper with Alice's dad, off to play some golf! Well Alice is at the office, who else but Spencer Wright shows up! (My creatition! xD) But he had a total different attitude then before he didn't head right over to Alice but he moved away, his pain and despair from him leaving her was written all over his face; he was defiantly not ready to see her yet. Mrs. Cullen and Mrs. Wright are all into it trying to get Alice and Spencer back together, what more would two best friend moms want right?! But as that goes down Jasper is going through a hell of a golf game! Making some hit in runs with his golf club, but Dan was all into it, loving the aderaline and excitement! Sometime through that Jasper actually busts his shoulder playing GOLF!

Things that were changed:

Something I changed through these chapters was Alice's cheery nice dad, when I had planned it both Alice's parents were gonna be dinks, but then I changed my mind thinking Alice should have got her loing, cheerful personality from someone! Which turned out very well I might say! xD If I hadn't changed it who knows, Alice's first dream could have come true! *GASP*

Highlights!

1. I went into the bathroom and changed into them, coming out with no shirt on. I heard Alice’s breath catch when she saw me; I felt a smug grin creep onto my face, as she swooned at my bare chest.
“Sorry, I forgot to grab a shirt…” I mumbled innocently, putting my dirty clothes beside the suitcase. She raised a disbelieving eyebrow.
“Mmm, of course you did.” She rolled her eyes, her voice thick with sarcasm. I chuckled deviously and sat beside her.
“Having a good time?” I asked her. She didn’t answer for a minute and I stared at her a little confused, she was still staring at me. “Alice..?” I chuckled, waving my hand in front of her face.
“Huh? OH! Yeah, good time, for sure! I’m glad we came!” She stumbled with her words. I couldn’t hold my laughter anymore; she had the same startled look as earlier when I had laughed. “What?!” She growled defensively.
“What do I have some godly beauty or something?” I joked and nudged her with my elbow. Her cheeks turned bright red and she ducked her head in embarrassment.
“Maybe.” She grumbled, with a small cute glare.


2. "Good morning.” I said politely to her and she scowled at me.
“Oh I bet it was an even better night.” She hissed with venom at me fiercely. I gave her a confused look than gave Alice one she shrugged dumbfounded too.
“Mom, what are you talking about?” Alice asked quietly, respecting her mom. Her mom’s eyes went wide.
“Don’t act innocent with me! I know what happened, I went to say goodnight to you and you weren’t even in your room and you never went back into your room!” She growled angrily at her. “This would never happen with Spencer! He was a gentleman, always respecting you.”


3. walked over the hole casually putting my tee into the ground, balanced my ball into it, and then wound up, AND MY CLUB FLEW OUT OF MY HAND. The club went flying into another person’s golf cart leaving a huge dent. The peoples yelled out at us and started to head toward us hastily, looking very angry, I could understand why… I froze in shock and turned wide eyed to Dan, who smirked and I flashed him a confused look.
“COME ON HURRY, BEFORE SECURITY COMES!” Dan yelled with a glint of mischief in his voice, he grabbed my arm and ran to the cart, he dove into the car and I did the same after him, speeding away quickly. “Ha-ha! Suckers!” Dan laughed playfully, still speeding down the small dirt road, his eyes sparking his excitement. I turned to him with a shocked look plastered on my face. He slammed onto the brakes at the next hole and he pulled himself out of the car slinging his golf bag over his shoulder then spoke.
“What? Didn’t think a rich well mannered man like me would do that? Ha-ha don’t judge a book by its cover, son!”


4. “Umm, why don’t you let me take care of those?” I asked politely, motioning to the bags. He shook his head and chuckled to himself. Then he suddenly picked the bag up in one swift move, like it was a pillow. I stood there with wide eyes, my mouth popping open as he did it again to the next one. After he had put all the bags into the truck and I still stood there in shock.
“Remember I have lived with her for her whole life. I’m used to the weight of her luggage. Let’s just say I never worried about needing to go to the gym.” He laughed and patted my shoulder sympathetically and ushered me into the car.

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