This chapter started off with Alice and Spencer again. Alice was OBVIOUSLY shocked with Spencer's decision since he is indeed in love with her right?! Later after he leaves she feels horrid for putting him through that pain because she had been in love with him for years but now she just couldn't remember him and loved someone else. She went torn for breaking his heart. But as she was feeling this way her cousin Edward steps in to comfort her, I hadn't shown him much in the story so i wanted to throw him in because Alice and Edward are suppose to be TIGHT!
BUT AFTER ALL THAT ALICE STUFF IT GOES TO THE REAL REASON OF THE CHAPTER.
Back to the past; Jasper has dreams of his past to explain it all to you.
Q&A
No questions again! -_-
..well except for When will Alice found out about Jasper and his father. and i cant tell you yet!
Chapter 16- one month anniversary
Now on the last chapter it had only been like over TWO WEEKS i know it seemed like longer, so i had to skip two weeks, BUT during those two weeks nothing changed really, Alice and Jasper got closer, Jasper got closer to the family, but nothing changed with the gang; Jasper is still on the edge with them, nothing changed with his step dad. :(
But two weeks needed to go by or we'd never get ANYWHERE!
ANYWAYS, this chapter was about their one month they had a nice cute picnic! xD I KNOW SOME OF THE STUFF WAS CHEESY :P i had fun writing that. I hope it was okay with you guys! Jasper did write another song which is on the playlist called Only one in color by Trapt. GREAT SONG i recommand listening to it, AND MY PLAYLIST! :D
But as the chapter finished Alice mentioned meeting her parents; i'll give you one thing THEY ARE RICH AND STUCK UP! ..uh oh for Jazz.
lots of twists with that, and the dream also explains that Alice knows how stuck up they are and now she is sort of worried. LOL THE CAR THING WAS A JOKE ! because we all know she lvoes her car :P. but remember that was a dream, not really whats is going to happen. it may or may not lol.
Q&A
Q. what was with the guys in the bushes? lol
A. Well, if you didn't get that, IT WAS LAURNET! xD like from in new moon when shows up in the forest with bella, you know? LOL! it was to go along with the Jasper thing! :D
Q. there hasn't been much gang drama lately. I can only assume it will come back soon?
A. You are corrrrect! *gold star* yeah i have't put them in much but they will be back, i'm sorry if you miss them :P. and mack's little comments xD. BUT YES i was just focusing on Spencer leaving and then the anniversary they should be back up. I don't know if next chapter if not the next! :)
Chapter highlights! :D
whats the highlights this time? *drum roll*
1. JAMES' APPEARANCE:
Suddenly he tilted his head to the side and took a deep breath in, it looked like his eyes were going roll back in his head. “Oh you brought a snack!” He hissed looking straight at the cookies. His eyes clicked back to normal and a pleasant smile appeared. “Remember not to leave anything when you leave, don’t want animals getting that stuff!” He explained politely and turned around to leave.
2. LAURNET'S APPEARANCE:
“Mmm, you’re mouthwatering.” A creepy man with black dreadlocks said as he came out of the bushes. Jasper tightened his arms around me and gave the guy a glare. “OH! I MEAN THE COOKIES ARE MOUTHWATERING! Excuse me. That’s what I meant!” He stumbled over his words clumsily.
3. Number three is either, Alice being worried about her car:
“If that’s your decision fine, but we are not supporting you anymore! If you will not listen to our rules then oh well. No more money from us for shopping, and we are taking your car back!”
“NOOOO!” I screamed and jumped out of bed, I was breathing so heavily, I was panting. It was just a dream realized! I felt the sweat on my brow. I jumped out of bed and ran to the garage. As I opened the door I saw my car and ran for it.
“YES IT’S STILL HERE!” I yelled joyously, as I jumped up and down though I saw Emmett and Rosalie, who were in previously making out in Rosalie’s Convertible, staring at me like I was crazy.
“Can we come in?” He called from a while back in his loud voice. But I saw Rosalie shove him lightly forward. “What! I don’t want to walk in on something!” He growled back at her, Emmett saw us and rolled his eyes. “Don’t you guys ever do anything?!” He snorted looking at us with unbelieving eyes.
THATS IS FOR TODAY! THANKS FOR READING, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! :D
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