Chapter 12- Broken Record
This chapter was focusing on Spencer and Alice really. Jasper had to go out of town with the gang (which he has had a lot of problems with lately.) so obviously who swoops in to save the damsel in distress?! SPENCER TO THE RESCUE! (Many of you probably want to suffocate him in this sleep but... I FOUND OUT AT LEAST ONE PERSON LOVES HIM! HA!) So, through the day he takes her and Johnny for a drive and OH he is becoming Johnny's new idol? Hmm! We shall see! Then there was the beach scene where Alice confesses to Bella (I was trying to get some more Bella action in there, since they are BEST FRIENDS, and special thanks to Knkcullen who suggested this idea) and Bella tells her story about Edward + Jake.
Q & A
This is new, but I am going to pick random questions out of the reviews and explain them a little, NOT GIVING ANYTHING AWAY!
Q. I wonder what is the deal with Emmett though, why doesn't he like Spencer now?? He didn't like Jasper before but now he does.
A. Well, it's because Emmett really likes Jasper and with Spencer around he thinks he'll replace Jasper and he doesn't like Spencer cuz he is more girly LOL! Hence the- Emmett let out one of his loud laughs.“Why? In case someone tries to steal your purse?!” I had that line planned right when Spencer came in :P, so I had to throw it in! Also I don't think Emmett actually didn't like him he just didn't know him, and he was warning Alice because it is his cousin sooo .
Q. when will enough be enough? when will he try to leave the gang?
A. WELL! I can;t tell you the EXACT CHAPTER or if he WILL. But as we are getting farther we have seen him think about it, he said he was going to but he wasn't ready and Alice said no not yet. But he is also giving a lot of attitude LOL!
-"Well, too bad! You are always with that damn girl anyways. She ain’t even that hot. Get over the little whore! I didn’t ask if you wanted to come, I told you we were going!” He ordered at me, I jumped up and grabbed him by the collar and shoved him against the wall.
“Don’t call her that.” I growled angrily, my face right up in his. His eyes flamed with fury. His fist smashed into my face. My grip on his collar fell and I stumbled backward.
“WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?!” He fumed at me.
“You don’t even KNOW HER! She is better than any other girl you have ever or ever WILL BE WITH! Don’t ever talk about her like that!” I shouted back, standing right in front of him, not showing any fear. He balled his hands into fists. I tightened my jaw muscles.
“Do you know who I am anymore?! What you think just because you got a girl you can go all tough boy?! NO! I still own you! I own this town! Don’t get on my bad side!” His fist met my face again, then again. “You need to smarten up!” He yelled in my face, his hand rose again, but this time mine hit his face, I wasn’t thinking! I heard everyone in the diner gasp then it was silent. Greg wiped the blood off his lip and looked straight into my eyes. I opened my mouth but didn’t say anything.-
So idea is deff. running through his mind!MISTAKE ALERT!
Before writing this chapter I was proof reading a chapter of Fight for Love (One of my other stories) and one of the main characters name is CONNOR. So when I was writing this chapter is kind of slip onto the page instead of Spencer.
“Live.” I grumbled as Connor (this is Spencer NOT Connor!) came into sight. He chuckled quietly and sat beside me.
“Well, truthfully, pancakes don’t ever actually LIVE.” He said with a cute smile tugging on his lips. I rolled my eyes at him and shoved the last piece into my mouth. Chewing it angrily. WHERE WAS HE? Greg said they’d be gone all yesterday, Jasper said we’d eat breakfast together. My breath caught. What if something happened to him?! I felt the blood rush from my face.
Sorry about that! You were all probably pretty confused like MAN ANOTHER BOY! >.<Chapter 13- The competition
So, at the end of the last chapter JASPER SHOWS UP! yaaaay! and it is the BIG DAY OF THE COMPETITION Johnny's big day! So we have all been waiting to see what BIG thing was going to happen with Johnny and we found out :(. Johnny was ALOT MORE LIKE JASPER then we all thought. His dad was abusing him and his mother. BUT Jasper helps them out by calling the police instead of going into GANG STATE and killing the dad like he wanted to because Alice set him straight. AND AND AND they kissed at the end! :P
Q & A
Q. Does this mean Alice chose Jasper over Spencer??
A. Because of the kiss? umm, not necesarily... lol! we'll have to wait and see, SORRY! xD
Q. But how is Jasper going to leave the gang without them killing him?
A. WELL! haha.. good question! i cant really tell you that without ruining it. maybe he'll like turn into SUPERMAN for two minutes ! *wiggles eyebrows!* we shall see!
Q. and i had a question, what about jaspers mom? Q. are you going to write a chapter about Jasper's past?
A. AHH YES! I wanted to explain this! Well I am going to have a chapter with flash backs to learn more about his past and family. BUT i will tell you his mom died.
Q. speaking of spencer has he died a horrible and painful death yet?
A. LOLLLL! No i'm sorry he has not :P. keep voting it on the poll and maybe someday it'll happen!
Highlights of the chapter-
So I was thinking WHEN you review tell me what your favorite part was and it will get a place in the chapter highlights! :D I'll just pick from what i got out of the reviews this time!
WELL OBVIOUSLY THIS PART!
1. I headed toward the door than stopped with a smile. I have a better idea, I walked through the rain to the side of the house where Alice’s window was. I reached down into Esme’s garden and picked up some pebbles. I aimed at Alice’s window and tossed the rock, it made a little clicking noise. I threw two more; Alice appeared at the window with an amused look on her face. I waved her down and grinned leaving the window. After a minute I saw her skipped through the rain toward me, and then she jumped into my arms, I spun her around. She let out a fir of giggles; I put her back down on the ground, staring into her beautiful green eyes.
“You’re wearing my sweater.” She sang, rubbing her nose against mine.
“Yeah.” Was all I got out, her eyes captured me. She looked at me happily, her eyes dancing with love. I placed my hands on both her cheeks, my thumbs wiping the rain drops off her cheeks. “I like it better than the gang jacket.” I informed her sweetly; her face toward into a huge grin. She grew taller, stepping on her tip-toes, I leaned into her, her breath hitting my face. I closed the space between us, bringing my lips onto hers, at that moment we become on, her sweet lips moving with mine, contacting us together.
2. “You are better than Spencer you know.” He told me in a very sure voice. “Alice knows that too.” I chuckled and ruffled his hair.TOP TWO SCENES OF THE CHAPTER!
Well thats it for these two chapters because I didn't change much of them so no deleted scenes and such! THANKS FOR READING! :D
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