Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Chapter 20&21

Meetings the parents part 3+4

These were the two finally chapters of Meeting the parents. Which was a dramatic and interesting little segment. Loved writing it, i really did LOL! You guys all wanted to shoot me for bring the one and only Spencer Wright in but you know, i just love him to death! Some of you don't mind, like beccaxx who is like madly in love with him! WOOT WOOT! But then some want his guts ripped out and burned such as jazzie-luvs-me22!
But something interesting happened in part 3, Jasper and Spencer called it PEACE! When Spencer offered to play a game of pool with him:

Spencer stood up as he arrived and smiled at Jasper politely.

“Wanna play some pool? If you’re up to it.” Spencer asked Jasper, glancing at his hurt arm for a moment. My eyes widened in shock, what?! Jasper looked at him curiously then smiled back a little.

“Okay. I bet I can beat you with a busted shoulder.” He grinned and took off the sling, they both headed over to the pool table, my mom and Mrs. Wright sat in shock like I did for a few minutes. Wait a second…. What just happened here?! I moved over to the pool table sitting on the edge of one of the arm chairs, as I watched the two of them play and joked around a part of me calm inside of me.

“Ha! Take that! Just because you won my girlfriend over doesn’t mean you can beat me at pool!” Spencer chuckled after he got a ball into the hole. “Oh! Be careful; don’t want to bust your shoulder playing pool too!” He continued a mischievous smile on his face. Jasper chuckled too and rolled his eyes.

“Watch it, pretty boy. I might steal your purse.” Jasper snickered as he shot a ball into the pocket as well.

“Winner gets a kiss from Alice!” Jasper said as he looked over the balls to see he only had two left and Spencer had three.

That was a memorable moment, Jasper and Spencer are so funny playing pool, WINNER GETS TO KISS ALICE! Spencer suddenly becomes a pro pool player! LOL
But this chapter actually was something a little different because of how many different POVs I put in there because you really needed to read each one for it to be perfect!

In chapter 21! It was more of a time for Alice and Jasper time, no one else, except at the beginning when a surprsing thing happened, ALICE'S MOM SHOOK JASPER'S HAND! *gasp*
But no it really happened! It wasn't your just imagnation! Finally she was beganning to accept Jasper as Alice's boyfriend (even though she is STILL stuck on Spencer) But we should all give her a pat on the back for trying I guess. There's still a lot of time for her to get used to it!
Then Alice and Jasper have a fantastic outing to the mall (although Jasper was groaning internally the whole time :P) then to a nice little fancy resturant in NY!

Something I did not mention:
Now when I was writing this chapter (21) I planned to exactually see them eating and hearing their decissions. This part:

Jasper watched me lovingly as I read through the menu to find everything had crazy French names. I wonder how I ordered before losing my memory. Did I know French?

“You don’t need to read through that, I asked them to make us something special,” Jasper mentioned as he slipped off his suit jacket and hung it on the back of his chair.

I stopped the dinner before they got back from dancing but this had meaning, Jasper had ordered them to make Spaghetti, I know you are thinking AT THAT PLACE! But on the picnic when Jasper was asking all those questions he asked her favorite food and she said Spaghetti! And thats what he had them make. (Sorry about the print, this blog is trying to make me shoot it!)

Something you might not have noticed:
Something you not have noticed is on the playlist.

Hope playlist

Your Universe- Rico Blaco: This song Jasper wrote for Alice.

The Best Thing- Relient K Jasper to Alice

Forevermore- Side A

You found me- Kelly Clarkson

I knew I loved you- Savage Garden

No one- Alicia keys

A moment like this- Leona Lewis

Your Guardian Angel- Red Jumpsuit Apparatus: Song from Spencer to Alice.

Hold on- Good Charlotte: Song about Jasper

Save you- Simple plan: For Jasper from Alice

Wishes and Dreams- Stellar Kart:

Franklin- Paramore:

Only one in color- Trapt: Jasper wrote for Alice ONE MONTH ANNIVERSARY!

You fill my heart- Jason Walker: For both of them.

Taking me over- Evanescene: Spencer for Alice.

What hurt the most- Rascal flatts: Alice's sad song

To make you feel my love- Kris Allen (from American idol): Jasper for Alice.

Remember the time- Michael Jackson: Spencer for Alice.

Falling slowly- Glen Hansard: Jasper for Alice.

The way you look tonight - Michael Buble: Song Alice and Jasper dance to in New York

The last FOUR songs are actually by the same person, sort of. I watch American idol, right? Do you see up there it has Kris Allen (American idol) He actually sung all those last four songs different weeks. LOL! He is like on the same page as me when I am writing, it is literally INSANE! He inspires my music now! Also, I now have a picture of Spencer on my profile, lol, he isnt REALLY Spencer! just someone who looks like I described him, Adam Lambert, WHO IS ALSO OFF AMERICAN IDOL! Isn't that show insane? But uh-oh, its the top three this week and one of them might get kicked off :|.

Well thanks for reading!
AND Homegirl aka Amanda THANKS FOR ALWAYS REMINDING ME!


Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Chapters 18+19

Chapters 18+19- Meeting the parents part 1+2

What went on:
Now these two chapters had A LOT happening, them in a nut shell, OR A COCONUT SHELL; there's so much. Alice and Jasper go to meet Alice's parents *DUN DUN DUHH!* Right off Alice's dad, Dan, loves Jasper and accepts him, but Charlotte (Alice's mom) is a total other story! In chapter 18 they had a little time with her parents then headed to bed, ALICE FALLING ASLEEP IN JASPER'S BED, that means trouble! for sure! When they head down for breakfast with parents the next morning Alice's mom accuses them of sleeping together! LOL! Later that day it was time to head out, Alice with her mom; to the business, Jasper with Alice's dad, off to play some golf! Well Alice is at the office, who else but Spencer Wright shows up! (My creatition! xD) But he had a total different attitude then before he didn't head right over to Alice but he moved away, his pain and despair from him leaving her was written all over his face; he was defiantly not ready to see her yet. Mrs. Cullen and Mrs. Wright are all into it trying to get Alice and Spencer back together, what more would two best friend moms want right?! But as that goes down Jasper is going through a hell of a golf game! Making some hit in runs with his golf club, but Dan was all into it, loving the aderaline and excitement! Sometime through that Jasper actually busts his shoulder playing GOLF!

Things that were changed:

Something I changed through these chapters was Alice's cheery nice dad, when I had planned it both Alice's parents were gonna be dinks, but then I changed my mind thinking Alice should have got her loing, cheerful personality from someone! Which turned out very well I might say! xD If I hadn't changed it who knows, Alice's first dream could have come true! *GASP*

Highlights!

1. I went into the bathroom and changed into them, coming out with no shirt on. I heard Alice’s breath catch when she saw me; I felt a smug grin creep onto my face, as she swooned at my bare chest.
“Sorry, I forgot to grab a shirt…” I mumbled innocently, putting my dirty clothes beside the suitcase. She raised a disbelieving eyebrow.
“Mmm, of course you did.” She rolled her eyes, her voice thick with sarcasm. I chuckled deviously and sat beside her.
“Having a good time?” I asked her. She didn’t answer for a minute and I stared at her a little confused, she was still staring at me. “Alice..?” I chuckled, waving my hand in front of her face.
“Huh? OH! Yeah, good time, for sure! I’m glad we came!” She stumbled with her words. I couldn’t hold my laughter anymore; she had the same startled look as earlier when I had laughed. “What?!” She growled defensively.
“What do I have some godly beauty or something?” I joked and nudged her with my elbow. Her cheeks turned bright red and she ducked her head in embarrassment.
“Maybe.” She grumbled, with a small cute glare.


2. "Good morning.” I said politely to her and she scowled at me.
“Oh I bet it was an even better night.” She hissed with venom at me fiercely. I gave her a confused look than gave Alice one she shrugged dumbfounded too.
“Mom, what are you talking about?” Alice asked quietly, respecting her mom. Her mom’s eyes went wide.
“Don’t act innocent with me! I know what happened, I went to say goodnight to you and you weren’t even in your room and you never went back into your room!” She growled angrily at her. “This would never happen with Spencer! He was a gentleman, always respecting you.”


3. walked over the hole casually putting my tee into the ground, balanced my ball into it, and then wound up, AND MY CLUB FLEW OUT OF MY HAND. The club went flying into another person’s golf cart leaving a huge dent. The peoples yelled out at us and started to head toward us hastily, looking very angry, I could understand why… I froze in shock and turned wide eyed to Dan, who smirked and I flashed him a confused look.
“COME ON HURRY, BEFORE SECURITY COMES!” Dan yelled with a glint of mischief in his voice, he grabbed my arm and ran to the cart, he dove into the car and I did the same after him, speeding away quickly. “Ha-ha! Suckers!” Dan laughed playfully, still speeding down the small dirt road, his eyes sparking his excitement. I turned to him with a shocked look plastered on my face. He slammed onto the brakes at the next hole and he pulled himself out of the car slinging his golf bag over his shoulder then spoke.
“What? Didn’t think a rich well mannered man like me would do that? Ha-ha don’t judge a book by its cover, son!”


4. “Umm, why don’t you let me take care of those?” I asked politely, motioning to the bags. He shook his head and chuckled to himself. Then he suddenly picked the bag up in one swift move, like it was a pillow. I stood there with wide eyes, my mouth popping open as he did it again to the next one. After he had put all the bags into the truck and I still stood there in shock.
“Remember I have lived with her for her whole life. I’m used to the weight of her luggage. Let’s just say I never worried about needing to go to the gym.” He laughed and patted my shoulder sympathetically and ushered me into the car.

Chapter 17-

Chapter 17- Goodbye my old friends!

Goodbye my old friends was an EXTREMELY important chapter in this story as you remember that is when JASPER FINALLY LEAVES THE GANG! It is also when Alice and Jasper were about to head off to the dreaded New York City where Alice's parents and Spencer live! This chapter was actually not what I had planned at all! Jasper was not going to leave the gang for a while actually... LOL! But when I started writing it just typed itself out or something, my fingers have a mind of their own I guess..! But Jasper finally got tired of being a bad guy and he wanted to be good enough for Alice and good enough to be admired by Johnny. But something else big happened, Nick stood up for him. Nick has not been a big charactor in this story at all, just the old friend of Jasper. The one who got them into the gang, phft, nothing big! Nick sometimes seemed alright then other time like a big butthead, LOL! Like at the beginning (first chapter) he was the one who was going to start a fight with Edward about him making a move on Bella. But in this chapter he showed the side of the best friend he always was, sticking up for Jasper saying he would NOT hurt him and he would let him leave, even though the decission soulc have killed him.

Things you might not have noticed!

During this chapter and some before, but this one specifically I wanted to introduce Jasper actually FEELINGS peoples emotions! I know a lot of the Alice and Jasper know each other's emotions but that is mainly just because they know each other so well and the other person is like their other half so they can tell how they fell, BUT during this chapter as Jasper was doing his normal thing for the gang, the dirty work, Jasper began to feel the guy's fear and pain and it started to overcome Jasper which caused him to stumbled backward! there was also the part when Jasper went to see Alice after he left the gang "The happiness radiating off of her relaxed me more than ever," He is getting his powers! Although they will not be a big thing in this story, just the basics of them, he feels the emotions but cant manipulate them.

Hightlights of the Chapter!

1. “I’ll give you a hint!” I told her then shrugged my gang jacket off, dropping it on the floor. She narrowed her eyes and still had a confused look.
“You are hot?” She guessed with a lot of doubt.
“Yeah I get that a lot.” I chuckled, ruffling her hair up, and she glared at me for it
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2. “Alright if you say so!” She giggled and skipped out of the room happily. What was that all about? I wondering, walking over to grab one of her bags. I grabbed the gags handled and gave it a tug. WHOA! It was like 300 pounds! I pulled again, dragging it off the bed but it fell onto the floor, flattening my foot! OW! I groaned and started to drag across the room. I got to the top of the stairs and tried to pick it up again, holy crap! How much can a girl pack?!
“Emmett!” I called loudly down the stairs, I heard Alice laugh from the living room. Emmett stomped his way up the stairs and raised a questioning eyebrow.
“Can you bring Alice’s bags to the car?” I asked trying to be casual. He shrugged and went into the room to get the other first. I followed behind him with a smirk.
“Holy crap!” He yelled as he picked it up. “HOW MUCH DID SHE PUT IN HERE? It weighs a ton!” He grunted as he continued carrying it down the stairs. I grabbed mine which was much lighter and followed him. As Emmett passed Alice she chuckled.
“Amateurs…” She mumbled, still holding her angelic face.

3. Greg walked straight up to me, his face in mine. “This is your family Jasper. We are all you have; you are just going to drop us and everything we’ve been through?” He asked in a calm, innocent tone, but I knew anything I said I would get the same punishment. I just nodded my head in reply. He shrugged casually. “Your decision.” He stated and stepped back. He turned to Nick because this was his job now, well along with the others. Nick had to start the beatings. The other guys in the gang started grabbing their chains, and taking out their knives; waiting for their cue. I froze in shock as Nick shook his head.
“No. I won’t hurt him. He wants to leave, I’ll let him. He didn’t do anything to me.” He said, his eyes filling with some fear of his own, he held his ground. Greg too shocked he didn’t speak, his eyes wide with surprise. He glanced back from me to Nick. We were his lead guys, his right and left hand.

I hoped you enjoyed my insider on chapter 17- Goodbye my old friends!