Chapter 15&16

Chapter 15- Back to the past

This chapter started off with Alice and Spencer again. Alice was OBVIOUSLY shocked with Spencer's decision since he is indeed in love with her right?! Later after he leaves she feels horrid for putting him through that pain because she had been in love with him for years but now she just couldn't remember him and loved someone else. She went torn for breaking his heart. But as she was feeling this way her cousin Edward steps in to comfort her, I hadn't shown him much in the story so i wanted to throw him in because Alice and Edward are suppose to be TIGHT!
BUT AFTER ALL THAT ALICE STUFF IT GOES TO THE REAL REASON OF THE CHAPTER.
Back to the past; Jasper has dreams of his past to explain it all to you.

Q&A

No questions again! -_-
..well except for When will Alice found out about Jasper and his father. and i cant tell you yet!





Chapter 16- one month anniversary

Now on the last chapter it had only been like over TWO WEEKS i know it seemed like longer, so i had to skip two weeks, BUT during those two weeks nothing changed really, Alice and Jasper got closer, Jasper got closer to the family, but nothing changed with the gang; Jasper is still on the edge with them, nothing changed with his step dad. :(
But two weeks needed to go by or we'd never get ANYWHERE!
ANYWAYS, this chapter was about their one month they had a nice cute picnic! xD I KNOW SOME OF THE STUFF WAS CHEESY :P i had fun writing that. I hope it was okay with you guys! Jasper did write another song which is on the playlist called Only one in color by Trapt. GREAT SONG i recommand listening to it, AND MY PLAYLIST! :D
But as the chapter finished Alice mentioned meeting her parents; i'll give you one thing THEY ARE RICH AND STUCK UP! ..uh oh for Jazz.
lots of twists with that, and the dream also explains that Alice knows how stuck up they are and now she is sort of worried. LOL THE CAR THING WAS A JOKE ! because we all know she lvoes her car :P. but remember that was a dream, not really whats is going to happen. it may or may not lol.

Q&A

Q. what was with the guys in the bushes? lol

A. Well, if you didn't get that, IT WAS LAURNET! xD like from in new moon when shows up in the forest with bella, you know? LOL! it was to go along with the Jasper thing! :D

Q. there hasn't been much gang drama lately. I can only assume it will come back soon?

A. You are corrrrect! *gold star* yeah i have't put them in much but they will be back, i'm sorry if you miss them :P. and mack's little comments xD. BUT YES i was just focusing on Spencer leaving and then the anniversary they should be back up. I don't know if next chapter if not the next! :)

Chapter highlights! :D

whats the highlights this time? *drum roll*

1. JAMES' APPEARANCE:

Suddenly he tilted his head to the side and took a deep breath in, it looked like his eyes were going roll back in his head. “Oh you brought a snack!” He hissed looking straight at the cookies. His eyes clicked back to normal and a pleasant smile appeared. “Remember not to leave anything when you leave, don’t want animals getting that stuff!” He explained politely and turned around to leave.

2. LAURNET'S APPEARANCE:

“Mmm, you’re mouthwatering.” A creepy man with black dreadlocks said as he came out of the bushes. Jasper tightened his arms around me and gave the guy a glare. “OH! I MEAN THE COOKIES ARE MOUTHWATERING! Excuse me. That’s what I meant!” He stumbled over his words clumsily.

3. Number three is either, Alice being worried about her car:

“If that’s your decision fine, but we are not supporting you anymore! If you will not listen to our rules then oh well. No more money from us for shopping, and we are taking your car back!”

“NOOOO!” I screamed and jumped out of bed, I was breathing so heavily, I was panting. It was just a dream realized! I felt the sweat on my brow. I jumped out of bed and ran to the garage. As I opened the door I saw my car and ran for it.

“YES IT’S STILL HERE!” I yelled joyously, as I jumped up and down though I saw Emmett and Rosalie, who were in previously making out in Rosalie’s Convertible, staring at me like I was crazy.

OR Emmett showing up at the clearing:

“Can we come in?” He called from a while back in his loud voice. But I saw Rosalie shove him lightly forward. “What! I don’t want to walk in on something!” He growled back at her, Emmett saw us and rolled his eyes. “Don’t you guys ever do anything?!” He snorted looking at us with unbelieving eyes.

THATS IS FOR TODAY! THANKS FOR READING, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! :D

Chapter 14

CHAPTER 14- DECISIONS

Oh we all remember this chapter LOL, when Alice and Spencer start making a decision, they same decision, to leave. But neither of them know that they are. Throughout this chapter though there was THREE points of view, which i had never done before. NEW THING! But i hadn't planned that, REALLY, i was writing it and then i realized, OH CRAP Spencer was one who was going to give up and leave NOT Alice letting him go. SO! after writing it all i figured keep it in, it has some fun playfully stuff with Alice and Jazz! Same with Jasper point of view, I had wrote it then i realized it can't be his because Spencer is leaving Alice and he won't be there! GAH! But i kept that and just wrote it again in Alice's, i hope it wasn't too repeative.

Q&A

There were questions about Jasper's past but if you read the next chapter it explained all that so i won't go on with it.

Q. When will Jasper get out of the gang? and how does THAT go over?

A. Man, i never can answer these questions without ruining it! It's not going to go over WELL obviously but lets hope he makes it out ALIVE, then be some twists! :D IT'LL BE GOOD! As of for when, well thats a surprise! shhh

THATS ALL THE QUESTIONS I GOT! :O remember to send some in so i can answer 'em here!

Chapter Highlights!
well! The first high would be BY FAR this one.


1.SPENCER LEAVING! You all made it very clear that you were VERY excited about that part :P. well except my few Spencer lovers, HE IS AMAIZNG, MY CREATION :P. But yes he left.


2. Number two would be... At the end of the football scene when Alice wants a kiss!

“I’m going to go now...” I hinted to him impatiently. I glared at him for a second, wanting my kiss! He just looked dumbfounded. Boys! So clueless! I stepped close to him picking his big hands up in mine, and gazed up at him. He gave me a soft smile down; I prepared myself then felt a kiss on my forehead.

“Have fun!” He told me, letting go of my hands. I growled angrily at him. His face went clueless again.

“What?” He mouthed too innocently. Hmm! He knows doesn’t he! I just blanked a few times impatiently at him.

“Want me to warn him not to touch you?” He suggested gleefully, going to take a step forward. I grabbed his hand and shook my head with a smirk. He tilted his head into a thinking position.

“OH! I love you!” He added in, and threw me his biggest smile. I shook her head with a smile then waved my hand motioning more. He was getting closer. He pulled his eyebrows into his ‘concentration look’.

“You were kind of close!” I coaxed, still motioning with my hand for more. He gave out a loud sigh of frustration.

“Want me and Emmett to follow in the car behind in case he tries something?” He suggested hopefully, with a smirk. I glared angrily at him and gave up!

“Never mind!” I grumbled annoyed, I spun around to go to Spencer. I heard Jasper laugh softly behind me; suddenly his hand grabbed mine and spun me to him, his face right up in mine. He leaned down letting his lips meet mine in a long passionate kiss. When he pulled away I couldn’t keep the huge grin from spreading across my face, I loved his kisses.

“You knew that whole time didn’t you!” I growled at him, but still wore the smile on my face. He wiggled his eyebrows with mischief at me, and I shook her head and let out a laugh.

3. NUMBER THREE IS! ... Emmett walking in when they are studying:

"Oh… when you said you were “studying” I didn’t think you were actually doing THIS. I thought well… you know... other stuff… just, never mind…!” He babbled on, with an embarrassed look on his face.

“Nope, believe it or not, all relationships aren’t like you and Rosalie, sometimes we stop kissing to talk once in a while.” I snickered, placing my book down, giving Emmett a look of humor.

Emmett let out a fake gasp. “What kind of relationship is that?! You guys need help!” He joked back, winking at me playfully.

Those are the top three highlights of chapter 14! xD

THANKS FOR READING, NOW GO ONTO CHAPTER 15!

Chapter 12&13

HEY EVERYONE! Sorry I didn't write after the chapter, i actually forgot! THANKS FOR REMINDING ME Homegrl aka Amanda!


Chapter 12- Broken Record

This chapter was focusing on Spencer and Alice really. Jasper had to go out of town with the gang (which he has had a lot of problems with lately.) so obviously who swoops in to save the damsel in distress?! SPENCER TO THE RESCUE! (Many of you probably want to suffocate him in this sleep but... I FOUND OUT AT LEAST ONE PERSON LOVES HIM! HA!) So, through the day he takes her and Johnny for a drive and OH he is becoming Johnny's new idol? Hmm! We shall see! Then there was the beach scene where Alice confesses to Bella (I was trying to get some more Bella action in there, since they are BEST FRIENDS, and special thanks to Knkcullen who suggested this idea) and Bella tells her story about Edward + Jake.

Q & A

This is new, but I am going to pick random questions out of the reviews and explain them a little, NOT GIVING ANYTHING AWAY!

Q. I wonder what is the deal with Emmett though, why doesn't he like Spencer now?? He didn't like Jasper before but now he does.

A. Well, it's because Emmett really likes Jasper and with Spencer around he thinks he'll replace Jasper and he doesn't like Spencer cuz he is more girly LOL! Hence the- Emmett let out one of his loud laughs.“Why? In case someone tries to steal your purse?!” I had that line planned right when Spencer came in :P, so I had to throw it in! Also I don't think Emmett actually didn't like him he just didn't know him, and he was warning Alice because it is his cousin sooo .

Q. when will enough be enough? when will he try to leave the gang?

A. WELL! I can;t tell you the EXACT CHAPTER or if he WILL. But as we are getting farther we have seen him think about it, he said he was going to but he wasn't ready and Alice said no not yet. But he is also giving a lot of attitude LOL!
-"Well, too bad! You are always with that damn girl anyways. She ain’t even that hot. Get over the little whore! I didn’t ask if you wanted to come, I told you we were going!” He ordered at me, I jumped up and grabbed him by the collar and shoved him against the wall.

“Don’t call her that.” I growled angrily, my face right up in his. His eyes flamed with fury. His fist smashed into my face. My grip on his collar fell and I stumbled backward.

“WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE?!” He fumed at me.

“You don’t even KNOW HER! She is better than any other girl you have ever or ever WILL BE WITH! Don’t ever talk about her like that!” I shouted back, standing right in front of him, not showing any fear. He balled his hands into fists. I tightened my jaw muscles.

“Do you know who I am anymore?! What you think just because you got a girl you can go all tough boy?! NO! I still own you! I own this town! Don’t get on my bad side!” His fist met my face again, then again. “You need to smarten up!” He yelled in my face, his hand rose again, but this time mine hit his face, I wasn’t thinking! I heard everyone in the diner gasp then it was silent. Greg wiped the blood off his lip and looked straight into my eyes. I opened my mouth but didn’t say anything.-

So idea is deff. running through his mind!

MISTAKE ALERT!
Before writing this chapter I was proof reading a chapter of Fight for Love (One of my other stories) and one of the main characters name is CONNOR. So when I was writing this chapter is kind of slip onto the page instead of Spencer.

“Live.” I grumbled as Connor (this is Spencer NOT Connor!) came into sight. He chuckled quietly and sat beside me.

“Well, truthfully, pancakes don’t ever actually LIVE.” He said with a cute smile tugging on his lips. I rolled my eyes at him and shoved the last piece into my mouth. Chewing it angrily. WHERE WAS HE? Greg said they’d be gone all yesterday, Jasper said we’d eat breakfast together. My breath caught. What if something happened to him?! I felt the blood rush from my face.

Sorry about that! You were all probably pretty confused like MAN ANOTHER BOY! >.<


Chapter 13- The competition
So, at the end of the last chapter JASPER SHOWS UP! yaaaay! and it is the BIG DAY OF THE COMPETITION Johnny's big day! So we have all been waiting to see what BIG thing was going to happen with Johnny and we found out :(. Johnny was ALOT MORE LIKE JASPER then we all thought. His dad was abusing him and his mother. BUT Jasper helps them out by calling the police instead of going into GANG STATE and killing the dad like he wanted to because Alice set him straight. AND AND AND they kissed at the end! :P

Q & A

Q. Does this mean Alice chose Jasper over Spencer??

A. Because of the kiss? umm, not necesarily... lol! we'll have to wait and see, SORRY! xD

Q. But how is Jasper going to leave the gang without them killing him?

A. WELL! haha.. good question! i cant really tell you that without ruining it. maybe he'll like turn into SUPERMAN for two minutes ! *wiggles eyebrows!* we shall see!

Q. and i had a question, what about jaspers mom? Q. are you going to write a chapter about Jasper's past?

A. AHH YES! I wanted to explain this! Well I am going to have a chapter with flash backs to learn more about his past and family. BUT i will tell you his mom died.

Q. speaking of spencer has he died a horrible and painful death yet?

A. LOLLLL! No i'm sorry he has not :P. keep voting it on the poll and maybe someday it'll happen!


Highlights of the chapter-
So I was thinking WHEN you review tell me what your favorite part was and it will get a place in the chapter highlights! :D I'll just pick from what i got out of the reviews this time!
WELL OBVIOUSLY THIS PART!

1. I headed toward the door than stopped with a smile. I have a better idea, I walked through the rain to the side of the house where Alice’s window was. I reached down into Esme’s garden and picked up some pebbles. I aimed at Alice’s window and tossed the rock, it made a little clicking noise. I threw two more; Alice appeared at the window with an amused look on her face. I waved her down and grinned leaving the window. After a minute I saw her skipped through the rain toward me, and then she jumped into my arms, I spun her around. She let out a fir of giggles; I put her back down on the ground, staring into her beautiful green eyes.

“You’re wearing my sweater.” She sang, rubbing her nose against mine.

“Yeah.” Was all I got out, her eyes captured me. She looked at me happily, her eyes dancing with love. I placed my hands on both her cheeks, my thumbs wiping the rain drops off her cheeks. “I like it better than the gang jacket.” I informed her sweetly; her face toward into a huge grin. She grew taller, stepping on her tip-toes, I leaned into her, her breath hitting my face. I closed the space between us, bringing my lips onto hers, at that moment we become on, her sweet lips moving with mine, contacting us together.

2. “You are better than Spencer you know.” He told me in a very sure voice. “Alice knows that too.” I chuckled and ruffled his hair.

TOP TWO SCENES OF THE CHAPTER!

Well thats it for these two chapters because I didn't change much of them so no deleted scenes and such! THANKS FOR READING! :D